I found it hard to use a simile.
I found it easy to use some personification.
Tired arms aching,
loud hearts pounding,
warm water clapping as if you were slapping an open book together,
heavy breaths wheezing,
tight goggles pinching,
ear - piercing whistles shrieking,
relieved competitors dripping.
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