This week for writing we are learning how to use imagery using similes, alliteration, and juicy verbs.
Our cameo was an excerpt from "Joey Pigza Swallowed the key" by Jake Gantos.
I found it easy to use juicy verbs.
I found it tricky to use alliteration.
Sucking and licking the orange rubber spatula, my mouth watered and shook as the full oozing of sugar and chocolate took over my flavourless mouth. Blissful brownie batter slid down my throat like a wet paint slithering down a wall. I savoured every single drop. I scraped the bowl with my finger because that spatula just can't reach the rest. What were fingers made for? I shielded my bowl from my desperate siblings. I looked back at the bowl wondering why it was now so sparkling clean. Then my eyes widened. I was ready to cartwheel 100 times.
