Friday, November 29, 2019

The Rocketeer

This week we are doing a narrative from the literacy shed called The Rocketeer.
I found it easy to plan it because I did it with the teacher.
I disliked to type because it took a long time.
Here is the link to The Rocketeer
Spitfires zoomed and whirred over head. “ Mama, watch me!” cried Jimmy. He was skipping around with his beloved paper plane. Rubble and dust was swirled and kicked around. Jimmy had straight, black, smooth hair and little overalls. He also had bright blue eyes framed with thick glasses. Jimmy continued prancing around and meanwhile… Sirens screamed and wailed and the ginormous burglar bashed against the trundling car. Jimmy was silently playing with his plane when he heard sirens. Jimmy paused for a moment and the trundling cars smashed through the  brick wall about to run over Jimmy until… The Rocketeer swooped down and scooped up Jimmy. He was safe! Jimmy only got a glimpse of the “who” who saved him. Jimmy was sure he had a golden mask, a turbo boost, and dark, brown leather gloves. Once again the Rocketeer swooped down to the suited burglar. Walloping, dodging, and ducking swiftly. Finally the Rocketeer punched, knocking the burglar out in the process. Yellow teeth went flying to who knows where! Rocketeer shot above the clouds in his victory, and continued to be a hero.


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