We based our story on the Dragon Slayer. Please be aware that it does lag.
We needed to...
- use a hook
- describe the setting
- describe the characters
- describe the problem
- describe the resolution
- edit for spelling & puntuation
- present your work to a peer assesment
Tarragon trudged through the thick, wet, mud with his enduring horse, Black Bull. The rain stopped, but the gray, dark, miserable clouds still rolled on. Step after step. Hoof after hoof. The pair stumbled on. The desert was far and desolate, except for a hollow open humongous rock. They had reached their destination. Tarragon and Black Bull entered silently. There she was. Not alert of any danger, the dragon continued to scratch her back. Growling softly, the dragon spotted Tarragon. The dragon slayer pulled out his sword. The battle began. Tarragon yelled aggressively and charged at the dull green dragon but the dragon breathed fire ferociously… Tarragon gripped his sword and plunged it into the dragon’s heart. It had been done. Tarragon was about to slump down on Black Bull, but he heard a rustling in the bushes. 'What was it now?' thought Tarragon. A small, scaly-like body popped out of the bushes. It was a baby dragon. But Tarragon ignored it. He nudged Black Bull. He wouldn’t move. Black Bull jerked his head to the baby dragon as if to say; “You can’t just leave him there, take him.” The dragon was small. Innocent. Ignorant. Tarragon sighed and took the baby dragon in his arms, and he was the dragon slayer no more.
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