I did a little bit of tweaking, because the music person let me redo it.
Our success criteria was to use..
- Juicy verbs
- Specific nouns
- Adjectives
- Begin a sentence with a juicy verb/specific noun/adjective x4
- Link beginning and end
The audience claps for the first performer. Silence. Then, a bell jingles. I take a deep breath then exhale. Breathe, I think. Just do your best. My palms tingle with sweat as I skip out on the worn, black, desolate stage. Giving myself a pep talk, I think, fake it till you make it. Suddenly, the music plays. My body jolts with adrenaline. I start my routine, unprepared. I finish my dance, and the audience gives a roar of applause. Exhausted, I skip back out into the wings, the bell sounds once more.