Thursday, July 25, 2019

Winter

In Room One we are learning to use similes and personification.
Similes compare things using the words as or like. I enjoyed describing the nouns. I found it tricky to match my verbs and adjectives.

Outside on the field, frosty grass fizzed and crunched under my numb toes. The sky froze and the wind howled and pushed my back. My warm breath blew out steam like a puff of a mini cloud. Rain trickled down the back of my head as soon as I got inside. 

2 comments:

  1. wow such cool writing, i could really imagine it in my head as I read it

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  2. Kia ora Liam
    Thanks for reading my blog!
    What are you learning to about?
    Ma te wa
    Catalina

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